Prompt: words:Words that fade away| Day 873: 5 Minute Freewrite (Eng-Esp)

in GEMS5 years ago (edited)

Words can be sweet, bitter or sour. It all depends on the emotional state but, be careful! You can hurt someone with offenses or lies. Words are time bombs when they kaboom! they can damage half the city but that's not the worst thing when you don't have control they get engraved in your soul. A word that humiliates is as bad as a lie.

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Words that fade away.

Today I feel hurt by your words
that have been driven like stakes into my heart.
They say that words are carried away by the wind,
yours were left in my mind,
and are reborn every time the wind blows a gentle breeze.
Your words come and go like the waves of the sea
to strike the sand that innocently waits on the shore,
then they fade away, leaving their marks.
Words that dress up in their best suit,
so as not to show that they are dressed in lies,
and I don't know if I can thank you for not telling the truth.
My words are broken,
for not being a listener.
It's your words of smoke that dissipate with the wind
but they leave my feelings,
in half-lit ashes and with a bitter mouth,
waiting for the metamorphosis of your words.
Lying words that I want to believe don't exist,
to hold me on to you.
Words of water and salt.

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Español

Las palabras pueden ser dulces, amargas o ácidas. Todo depende del estado emocional pero, cuidado! puedes lastimar a alguien con ofensas o mentiras. Las palabras son bombas de tiempo, que cuando hacen kaboom! pueden dañar media ciudad pero eso no es lo peor, cuando no se tiene control quedan grabadas en el alma. Una palabra que humilla es tan mala como una mentira.

Palabras que se desvanecen.

Hoy me siento herida por tus palabras
que se han clavado como estacas en mi corazón.
Dicen que las palabras se las lleva el viento,
las tuyas quedaron en mi mente,
y renacen cada vez que el viento sopla una suave brisa.
Tus palabras van y vienen como las olas del mar
para golpear la arena que inocente espera en la orilla,
luego se desvanecen dejando sus huellas.
Palabras que se visten con su mejor traje,
para no mostrar que se visten de mentiras,
y no sé si agradecerles no decir la verdad.
Mis palabras son rotas,
por no ser escuchdas.
Son tus palabras de humo que se disipan con el viento
pero dejan mis sentimientos,
en cenizas medio encendidas y con la boca amarga,
esperando la metamorfosis de tus palabras.
Palabras de mentiras que quiero creer que no existen,
para seguir aferrada a ti.

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Prompt: Words
Set your timer for 5 minutes
Start writing
Use the hashtag #freewrite
Publish your piece (include a link to this post if you wish)

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Me encantó tu trabajo comay, buena inspiración

Gracias mi Comay, tu comentario siempre me fortalece.

Beautiful and sad words, @antoniarhuiz!

Oh, @jayna, I'm glad you visit my blog. Thanks you

Muy hermosas esas palabras que se desvanecen en medio de la tragedia de perder la fe y la esperanza.

Que triste, no? Gracias mi bella.

Amigas las palabras no se las lleva el viento, y luego no pueden ser recogidas. Es mejor callar cuando se esta molesto, y cuando venga la calma, entonces decir las cosas.
Suerte en el concurso, un abrazo.

Eso es amiga, gracias por pasear siempre por este lugar.