Open Mic Week 24 -- "Pine Trees" by BassBoatRadio

in #openmic8 years ago (edited)

What's up my decentralized friends....Been busy with other stuff for a couple weeks, but jonesing to share some more tuneage with my Steemit amigos. Here's my latest original contribution called "Pine Trees."

Pine Trees

She said "Baby let's go green"

And I knew exactly what she mean

Yeah working hard everyday

My baby needs a getaway

We need to get away

I know she likes that sand between her toes

And she's my bunny in the snow

Now it might seem routine

But the change of scene she means

Is between evergreens

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CHORUS:

Ain't talking bout a cruise line on the high seas

Or fruit wine B&Bs

Ain't but one place we wanna be

Chasing them butterflies & honeybees

Running wild in the breeze

Just you & me and the pine trees

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We stay cruising in our minds

On a deep lake losing track of time

Suppertime when the fish bite

Slow dance in the moonlight

Baby let's do it right

[CHORUS]

She said "Baby let's go green...."

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Another great song! Keep 'em coming.

You're a bonafide songwriter my friend. You definitely know your way around navigating through the melodies and catchy chords. This was a really enjoyable entry. Been listening to all the open mic entries with my daughter @happyharmonymay, she says she likes your guitar playing and I can't disagree at all. Your subtle notions when you sing really carry the lyrics with the cadence and tone. Nice job. Best of luck to your entry. Upvoted

Wow thanks man, that's high praise coming from a person w/ your high level of talent. Gracias my friend, good luck to you as well

You're most welcome bro, when you make it easy to compliment such praises, I couldn't ask for more inspiration in that moment. Looking forward to more of your original music. Thanks for the luck, I'll need it.

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Straight Fire sir!

Haha thank you for the vote of confidence sir.

Another great tune, thanks for sharing with us.
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Thank you sir, much appreciated

All your songs are straight fire man. This is what the radio should be playing. Great guitar emphasis on the up note as usual. Damn this makes me want to start writing again!

Thanks for the kind words my friend, it means a lot. I hope you do start writing again, I'm having tons of fun w/ it after taking a few years off!

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