Flowers Get Dried When Crappy Excuses Vomit Their Agony [Poetry]
Borrowed feelings from another era flutter in my mind
beating and stealing kindness with scorched kisses making me blind.
Empty tears floating inside the dinning room at 5 o'clock
shouting is dinner time so you can eat what's left of me and go.
Peppermint memories fly when no one sucks the life out of me
flowers get dried when crappy excuses vomit their agony.
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I know this feeling "no one sucks the life out of me" so well..and I am glad that I have a chance to rebuilt before no more me :-)
and I'm happy you have a new life! 😀
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oh you nailed this one!! and one should push out life suckers
Yeah but some suckers can't be pushed :|
true that , i do recomend nearest stairwell, <love the effect of fysics ^^
Nice editing my friend...
Thanks
howdy blacklux! uh..normally I don't comment about poetry because I don't usually get it but I do like the idea of vomiting out agony, get it out and gone!
Exactly! Get it out!
Just saw the original and like it better, this is a nice edit however 😉
Thanks!
My pleasure.