Home (an original poem)

in #writing7 years ago

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Home is not the same anymore
Even these mountains have changed

The number of familiar faces
Less than before

Vacant businesses more and more
Homes in despair

Once a thriving place
Now the fight is gone

Maybe its time to move on
Since home is not the same anymore

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Nice. Tim! Thats a good share.

Thank you!

Such a beautiful poem! The denial and then the acceptance.

Just not the same - to be true!
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good poem about losing that homely feeling. I've felt like this before and it was when I was in a place where I didn't belong. you reminded me of that time... 😀

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