Fuzznight
Fuzznight
original poetryInto the sort of dull reflection
One sees on an opaque metallic gloss,
Swallowed me and found me unappetizing,
But to display brovado, refused to spit me
Up into the blizzard cloud of waking life.
.
The scenes were commonplace to my
Lumber mind which became the palace
Of termites, wind whistling through
Fine channels, tickling neurons.
.
Was I supposed to be the subject
Of some gruff interrogation by
The erstwhile subconscious?
Or the object of admiration
For imps cavorting in
Groves obsure? No!
.
Neither was I silk environments,
(Though all the walls had eyes.)
The writhing creature spit me up
& I just groaned amidst its cries.
.
Was I rejected by the beast
That feeds on crumbling dross?
Did I become the hopeless stone
No jeweler'd ever dare emboss?
snap snap snap snap :)
golf clap golf clap XD
Golden revelation brings a calm wave of energetic snow. The song is the peak of the concentration of anarchic moves - You absorbed the silence of the word in your unthinkable mind @d-pend
Wow i love your rhrthorical question at the last verse. It made the poem colourful, you did such a beautiful job tol in verse one.
What a beauty man.
💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
You are a awesome writer starded following u and the images were also awesome
@de-pend
Hi @firemanvishal I'm glad you think so and I appreciate you stopping by my blog :)
Why you will ever remain my poetic role model is this! Your genius mind is always spewing beautiful contents... Steem on!
@originalworks
Resteemed your post
Congratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by d-pend from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem, theprophet0, someguy123, neoxian, followbtcnews/crimsonclad, and netuoso. The goal is to help Steemit grow by supporting Minnows and creating a social network. Please find us in the Peace, Abundance, and Liberty Network (PALnet) Discord Channel. It's a completely public and open space to all members of the Steemit community who voluntarily choose to be there.
Especially liked S3.