Steemnova: small rephrasing suggestions.

gregan (59)in #utopian-io • 8 years ago (edited)

Components

The Dark Matter store that's accessible via the Officers link in the left column called .Wirtshaft contains upgrades with confusing information (highlighted with red selection boxes):

Proposal

Rephrasing the confusing sentence "Time to the destruction" to "Effect duration", it also has to be researched instead of being recruited.

Translating the column title .Wirtshaft to .Economy, which probably has been overlooked in translating the game to English.

Mockups / Examples

N/A

Benefits

Less confusion; better understandment that it's a temporary upgrade (that's my impression anyway :-) ).
Translation and general syntax improvement.

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8 years ago in #utopian-io by gregan (59)

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trumpman (72) 8 years ago

Ha! I'll check out this game when I go back home :)

gregan (59) 8 years ago

Awesome :)

Here's my absolutely free staying very non-committal reference link :p :

https://steemnova.intinte.org/index.php?ref=411

No idea what a person gains by doing so actually.

samhamou (65) 8 years ago

Hi thank you for your contribution but Unfortunately we can't approve it

this suggestions are not seen as worth the reward, and your points of benefits are simple

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gregan (59) 8 years ago

Sure, I wasn't aiming for a reward anyway. Just pointing out some things.

By the way, your sentences could use some punctuation and correct grammar too; it was these instead of this for example.

Also just stating that my points are "simple" is actually a bit insulting. I know they were minor at best.

Thanks anyway, I guess.