Club 100 || Steemit Engagement Challenge W2 - D5 || An Original Story || Lost in you...
First of all I'd like to thank the the Colombia-Original community for coming up with such a creative idea for this challenge. I love creative writing and for that I even held a contest in which many users took part
I'm here now to write my own Creative story and the title of this story is:
LOST IN YOU
"She is still here" I said standing there in this evergreen graden of paradise . All that was left of me was a shallow man reaching out towards her silhouette grasping towards this scent she trailed behind her. All her traits and habits still stuck in my mind and all her warmth still there trapped in me causing me a walloing yet bittersweet love
"Have I gone insane?" "Is this even real"
Stuck in this endless loop of horror and romance.
She seems so far yet I can still reach her barely.
I am in awe of her presence I will never let her go , she is all I want, I want to sink into her melancholy that sway like vivid waves of violet musk and a fragrance of lust .
She's such a mix of all that's good and fair yet would set everything ablaze.
"Was it all just lies she told me?" his mind kept on having this storm of thoughts, his feelings in a disarry not being able to accept that she was not there anymore but still he hoped she was there and in his mind made this safe haven for all the mess she left behind, yet he fooled himself into a charade of fantasy that all she did was good to him and for him.
Seeing the scars on his body as a flower garden and the hole she left in his heart an eclipse of love.
This intensity of hopeless romanticism shows that a person can go to any lengths to keep something in their life and completely destroy everything else they have along this path of doom. Just for a fake satisfaction for just a moment or their eternity.
In all honesty, in the end the hopeless lover had nothing left to his name , not a single soul that cared as all others left him too due to his insane obsession for this unfinised love story. He ignored them all, hurt them all and showed that he had no need of their presence in his life as all he needed was her and this fake reality he had created in his head was so dear to them that in the end he was the only one left in his miserable reality. Not a shoulder to cry or lean on nor anyone to understand him .
In such a pathetic state all he had left was just his misery.
That's it from my side. This story comes from the deepest corners of my heart, and I'd love to have some feedback from the readers on it.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1
Hello dear friend, thank you for your entry, a very interesting story and one that makes our imagination run wild.
#Club100: revised!
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Hello @franyeligonzalez thank you for your feedback.
I have only made transfer to the winners of the contest arranged by me and these transfers are not counted. Please can you go through itagain? 😀
Thank you.
Hello friend, all transfers count in steemit.
I think you have got it wrong friend. If that were the case then all the community leaders who organize contests and the community accounts that create contests and distribute steem as reward wouldn't be able to be a part of #club100
I'm a part of #club100 since past 6 months and you can check this on steemworld.org
I'd request you to please take a look at it again. 😀
Cc: @steemcurator01 @franyeligonzalez
I hope the curator can clarify the situation for us as I have consulted with team leader @nahela and she has told me the same thing.
I am waiting for the answer. Thank for discussing about it.
😊😊😊
Thanks for your support friend.
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Yea this have been causing a lot of confusion,but I believe sir you with the current rule you are not in club 100 because a similar case had been settled before. To me what I would suggest is that the steemit team should edit the club rule, that is to say that transfer within steemit should not be considered especially when it comes community leaders who needs to give out steem to develop their community.
Hola amigo, el comentario ha sido editado, en vista de que ya se aclaró la situación. Saludos!
Thank you friend. A good day to you.
wow that was amazing, very detailed i felt like i was in his place going through the loss. Really like it.
keep up the good work, i would love to read more of your creative writings.
Such a realistic story you have explained everything was so good .. Best of luck