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RE: SLC21/WK3 | Managing Bleeding: The Basics of Controlling External and Internal Bleeding
Student Name: @uzma4882
Overall grade: 5.4
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Though the sad incident that the student mentioned had my thoughts but the answer was not satisfactory to this question as we adked for the method of applying a bandage on a bleeding site to see the understanding of the student of this critical method which would come in handy in case of any other emergency cases like the one student mentioned. There were no steps of applying the bandage mentioned in this question. For the next time, it'd be a better option for the student to comply to the rules mentioned in the question. | [Grade: 0] | |
| Question 2 | Similar to the first question, it seems like the student failed to understand the requirements of the question. If there were any confusion, please feel free to ask. | [Grade: 0] | |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency bleeding case. | The student missed out on mentioning the DRABC protocol which should always be followed. The important step of gaining access to the wound is missing. Making sure if there's a sharp object , then it shouldn't be removed in order to avoid further bleeding. | [Grade: 1.6] |
| Question 4 | The student clearly mentioned the steps of managing this case and calling for immediate medical support as well. The signs and symptoms of shock are clearly outlined as well. Good job | There are spelling mistakes in this question which kills the essence of the answer | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 5 | The patient managed to present an informative infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. You failed to provide a pictorial representation. | [Grade: 2] |
General Feedback: The student needs to focus more on the details of the questions separately and come up with detailed answers which would be beneficial for him in the future as well. The student demonstrates an understanding of managing bleeding and procedures of controlling internal and external bleeding but needs more explanation and practical approach in certain areas.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1