Via YouTube, Dtube was not working for some - Steemit Open Mic Songwriters Challenge Week 7 - "Hey Danielle" - Original Song
I am not a musician But I went out on a limb and posted this video I recorded tonight - it has me singing in it! which is a very scary thing! If you cannot stand off tune, out of key, non-rhythmic amateur singing, DO NOT WATCH THIS VIDEO - or do it with the volume muted.
This song titled "Hey Danielle" is an original piece written by me for my daughter. I wanted to create something that she could carry with her forever. This is also the first time I have ever written a complete song. Also the first time I have ever posted myself attempting to sing...
Here are the lyrics:
Hey Danielle, How you doing
You sure are looking lovely, but you always do
I see you playing, over on that swing set
Swinging so high, you're reaching for the sky
One of these day, and it wont be long
You'll be over yonder, writing your own song
So I just wanted to tell you, that no matter where you go
No matter who you decide to be, your mother and I will always love you
Hey Danielle, How you doing
You sure are looking lovely, but you always do
Growing up in this world, sure can be hard to do
That is why I vow, never to leave you
There will be times, where I seem out of reach
But just remember that, I will always be a part of you
When the world seem cruel, and all you can do is cry
Just call on me, and I will be your alibi
If you ever need a shoulder to cry on, just lean on me and I will stay strong
If you ever need a shoulder to cry on, just lean on me and I will stay strong
If you ever need a shoulder to cry on, just lean on me and I will stay strong
If you ever need a shoulder to cry on, just lean on me and I will stay strong - Yes I will be strong
Hey Danielle, How you doing
You sure are looking lovely, but you always do
I see you playing, over on that swing set
Swinging so high, you're reaching for the sky
One of these day, and it wont be long
You'll be over yonder, writing your own song
So I just wanted to tell you, that no matter where you go
No matter who you decide to be, your mother and I will always love you
Thanks for the listen!
Learn more about me by reading my Introduction Post
Not bad, dude - but what theme within the Songwriters Challenge have you written for here? Not quite worth "muting" - but I can't seem to find a connection to a particular theme here... Please correct me if I'm mistaken... Thanks, bro...
It is a stretch... but being a first time songwriter I went with it. I feel that always being in your child's heart, mind or presence is always "The right place, the right time".
Cool man. Week 7 ended though. We just started week 8 for that contest. You should enter our weekly Open Mic contest. Here is this week's That contest starts each Sunday and ends each Friday. You sound good man. Go for it!
Hey thanks! I will take a look at it!
Great job! And it looks like it has done pretty well!