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RE: ADSactly Sci-Fi : Outer Earth Series 'The One Eyed Man (Part 6)'
What is presented in this instalment seems to be of importance in the development of the mission entrusted (better, contracted) with Albright. Stories within another is a highly prized resource in literature, at least since Shakespeare and Cervantes. You use it quite well. Apparently, Claire's intervention -an undoubtedly very attractive character- would be a key to fulfilling the task at hand with Derek. We'll see. Thank you, @zentalk.
Absolutely. I feel that providing 'flashbacks' can enhance the overall realism of the story and create a better mental model of the characters and their lives. Thanks for the compliment via its use in this chapter. Most stories tend to benefit from male/female interaction and also provide more possibilities for what could happen. Also it provides a chance to show the alternate methods of a female and male hero, the way they think, talk, and solve problems. Thanks for following along!