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RE: ADSactly Sci-Fi : Outer Earth Series 'The One Eyed Man (Part 6)'

in #scifi6 years ago

What is presented in this instalment seems to be of importance in the development of the mission entrusted (better, contracted) with Albright. Stories within another is a highly prized resource in literature, at least since Shakespeare and Cervantes. You use it quite well. Apparently, Claire's intervention -an undoubtedly very attractive character- would be a key to fulfilling the task at hand with Derek. We'll see. Thank you, @zentalk.

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Absolutely. I feel that providing 'flashbacks' can enhance the overall realism of the story and create a better mental model of the characters and their lives. Thanks for the compliment via its use in this chapter. Most stories tend to benefit from male/female interaction and also provide more possibilities for what could happen. Also it provides a chance to show the alternate methods of a female and male hero, the way they think, talk, and solve problems. Thanks for following along!