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RE: ADSactly Sci-Fi : Outer Earth Series 'The One Eyed Man (Part 7)'
It maintains the sense of plausibility you've given to your story. As expected, Claire became interested in the contract. Albright, of course, is happy and, at the same time, eager for his company. The scene in the weapons warehouse is quite well resolved with its elements of warfare technology and the character Snake. Expectations of how the mission will be accomplished with Claire's participation are intensifying. Pending. Greetings, @zentalk.
Yes! Claire couldn't resist the easy money but there may be more to it than that... Albright hasn't had much luck with women (the kinds that dont sell their body for money...) so maybe its an opportunity for him to work on his social skills. The weapons warehouse was very fun to write, it took significant research into the weaponry of the future and review of my story outline to sort of figure out what would be needed in terms of devices to make it work (i can always go back and change what was purchased later if I decide to use something different, not use something or add something.). The action and mystery is ahead! Thanks for reading and giving me your thoughts on this chapter! I really like what you said about plausibility, that is important to me, the illusion must be upheld at all times to make it immersive!