I'm an arabic poetrist ,, my first english poem ever for steemian

in #poem7 years ago

Love her and love the rain
Love me and hate the rain
And one night I sat down and told her
The smooth Cloud
The rain spray
The nice breeze
And that is the thunder
But the longing of two clouds after travel
And the color of the earth in the fall is happy to look
I begun to dwell in story of life
The sky , cloud and rain
She loved the story that I told her
But she still afraid when the rain come down.

Actually its a translated arabic poem of my work

أُحبها وأعشق المطر
تحُبني و تبغض المطر
وذات ليلة وريفة
جلست أحكي ليها
نعومة الغيوم
عذوبة الرزار
لطافة النسيم
و أن هذا الرعد
إنما إشتياق غيمتين بعد أن تطاول السفر
و أن لون الأرض في الخريف يسعد النظر
ورحت أستفيض في حكاية الحياة
والسماء و الغيوم و المطر
فأحببت خريفي الذي قصصته لها
و لم تزل تخاف حين ينزل المطر..!

Hope u like it , upvote me to continue...

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Nice, @muazmutasim
I love the rain too :)
Keep going mate, you will do fine

Hhhhh do u!
Thank u ya farda

Nice (intee ) darling

😂😂😂😂😂😂

I love poetry!
I write my own in English :)
I'm from Syria born in Canada though. If you're interested follow me @raisinbran

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