Indisputably, I like your narrative voice more than poetics. This story has a good rhythm and you are developing it very well. I like the description you make of the landscape, of its decadence and sordidness. Also the incorporation of food and the woman who sells sexual favors. An interesting touch you haven't seen before! Everything serves to give a framework between misery, dirt and corruption to the story. I also find it attractive that you mix very advanced technological elements with others that are more primary and obsolete. Thank you for sharing this story, @zentalk.