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RE: What the Dying Wisdom of Sunset Said (Day 19)

in #poetry7 years ago

Hello @yahia

I have enjoyed reading through your poem and it's amazingly creative as it reveals the reality of life, nature and fate of man.

Learn to gaze upon things in a gentler light
then shut your eyes, sleep and awaken
unclouded by dust and mist accumulated
and see the gift, clearly, bathed in light

This line is quite deep and explosive. Overtime, I have learn to gaze upon the gentle light, see life through the morning sun rays and it's inspirational for me.

Thank you

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We get caught up in all the little things that don’t work out our way & forget to give thanks for the daily miracles. Patience is a way of thanksgiving 🙏🏼