Oh Wow yes I am crying so beautiful, so vivid I could see every scene. And the fact that it ended where it began, that was the cherry on top. BRAVO!!! @girlwithoutwings. I have been missing you, I woke up thinking about you and you had already left me a reply how synchronistic is that? Also if you are interested in this poetic piece getting more eyes, there is a lovely new community brewing, its called Steemit Vision Quest, this week's theme is "Angels Among Us" Here is the link. https://steemit.com/svq/@cabelindsay/steemit-vision-quest-week-3-angels-among-us
oh thank you for your lovely reply. You always say things so beautiful and speak so deeply from the heart. I've altered the ending ever so slightly. I partly feel like it's not quite finished -and partly feel like it is finished for me, just may be needs a little more explanation for the reader. Thank you for mentioning the new community I will pop a link in there if I can. As always much love <3