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Slowly walking down the dark corridor. The sound of her heel's is very clear in the middle of all that quietness. She reached to her room, at the end of the corridor. She slowly opened the door to not make a sound. Her room's old dusty door made a long squeal sound. She felt like, all the neighbors heard it, despite her attempts to make it down.

The lights were on in that room. The whole room looked like her day to day life. A portrait on the wall, as a resemblance of a beautiful past. An old wooden table with a flower vase on top. A lot of rose petals on the floor, making the place look messy. Just a shattered image of her struggles. Her suffer to manage time between life and work.

She kneeled to the ground and started picking them up. In attempt to make that old place look pleasant, if that was even possible. The girl had a lot of dreams. An imagined life, that does not look like anything in the room. She finished making the room clean again. Then, she went to bed and before she goes to sleep. She prayed for a better tomorrow, and a chance to turn things around.

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Gracias por publicar en la comunidad #Venezolanossteem

@ronnie10, tu texto es impecable. Me cautiva la manera cómo describes el espacio recreado en la pintura; y esa descripción nos permite comprender la fuerte conexión que existe entre la habitación "de aspecto desordenado" y la vida misma de la protagonista, que está lejos de ser lo que había soñado:

La chica tenía muchos sueños. Una vida imaginaria que no se parecía a nada de lo que había en la habitación. Terminó de limpiar la habitación. Luego, se fue a la cama y, antes de dormirse, rezó por un mañana mejor y por la oportunidad de cambiar las cosas.

Definitivamente, el universo nos manda mensajes para que revisemos nuestra existencia.

Gracias por unirte a este concurso. Esta es tu casa. Por tanto, puedes quedarte y sentirte como "pez en el agua". Un abrazo.

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Thanks.. your comments are always thorough and descriptive.
Plus, they say that the room does somehow represent the person from inside. As for us, with every day we have another chance to review, reflect and improve.
Have a nice day,

Esto es clave: "Cada día tenemos otra oportunidad para revisar, reflexionar y mejorar".

Lo importante es no procrastinar en lo atinente a mejorar como seres humanos. Un abrazo.

True that!

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