Creative writing | Poetry - "Us, the ocean and the beach" By @sailawana

in STEEM FOR BETTERLIFE4 years ago

Hi Steemian's

Happy to be back here to say hello to all steemian friends, I hope that your days are filled with goodness and blessings

This is me @sailawana will try to share my simple work about a poem inspired by a past story, I hope this simple poem can be entertaining.


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"Us, Oceans And Beaches"

We...
That day, crossed paths again on that road
And..
Without asking
Your shadow
Makes the walls of my heart rattle boisterously

His calm ripples swirled again...
Flying
Float
My Feeling

Your net is hitting right
Sharp jump
Curling me is made
Unbelievably clumsy

There are 3 240 days that we have spent together, wept together, wept and laughed..
Before the end
We waved at each other and, we then walked in opposite directions

Not easy for me
And I know it's even harder for you
Breaking us down into you and me

Then...
Distance and time heal wounds,
But what about forgetting???

It's not an easy matter,
Because the heart can't just be seduced

Sometimes
I revisited the dusty tomb of memories
Just to know how strong I am without you

How strong my heart is it now
When walking
Without you

Then how about missing you???
Don't ask again about it
Often my cries are present at night when longing fills my breathing cavity

I was cramped

Should I regret us??
Our story and togetherness??
Even though it's meaningless now, but there's nothing I want to regret

You are one of the best chapters ever written in my days

The story of love, struggle and patience and letting go is there
Well written and sweet

Even though our journey is now in a different direction

Today, when my longing reaches the top
I come back to the place that is our witness
at that time
Cry
Or laugh
I'm back, right?
My feet on the sand of this beach
Waiting for twilight
Enjoy the waves
And the wind
Trying to present again
Your figure by the side
Even though
I know it will never happen

Remembering you
On this beach
Is my favorite moment,

You said to me then
"The waves that hit the beach and the tide will erase the footprints of both of us...
However
ocean
Beach
And this sand
Will still be there.."

I dedicate this poem to someone who was my favorite person at that time in the past, my journey, my history🤍🖤

Indonesia version*

"Kita, Lautan Dan Pantai"


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Kita...
Hari itu, berpapasan kembali di jalan itu
Dan..
Tanpa di nyana
Kelebat bayangan mu
Membuat dinding hati ku bergemricik riuh

Riaknya yang tenang kembali berpusar...
Melayang
Mengapung
Rasaku

Netra mu menghunjam tepat
Melesat tajam
Meringkuk ku di buatnya
Kikuk tak karuan

Adalah 3 240 hari yang kita lalui memacu langkah bersama, merangkai tangis dan tawa ..
Sebelum akhirnya
Saling melambaikan tangan dan, kita kemudian berjalan berlawanan arah

Tak mudah bagi ku
Dan ku tau lebih sulit lagi untuk mu
Mengurai kita menjadi kau dan aku

Kemudian...
Jarak dan waktu yang menyembuhkan luka,
Namun bagaimana dengan melupa???

Sungguh bukan perkara mudah,
Karena hati tak bisa di rayu begitu saja

Terkadang
Aku kembali mengunjungi pusara kenangan yang sudah berdebu itu
Untuk sekedar mengetahui sekuat apa aku tanpa mu

Setegar apa kini
Aku
Kala berjalan
Tanpa mu

Lalu bagaimana dengan merindui mu???
Jangan di tanya lagi tentang itu
Sering nya tangis ku hadir di malam-malam saat rindu memenuhi rongga nafas ku

Sesak aku di buatnya

Haruskah aku menyesali kita??
Kisah dan kebersamaan kita??
Meski kini tak berarti lagi, namun tak ada yang ingin ku sesali

Kamu adalah salah satu bab terbaik yang pernah tertulis di hari2 ku

Cerita tentang kasih sayang, perjuangan dan kesabaran serta mengikhlaskan ada di sana
Tertulis rapi dan manis

Meski perjalanan kita kini berbeda arahnya

Hari ini, kala rindu ku mencapai ubun-ubun
Kembali ku datangi tempat yang jadi saksi kita
Kala itu
Menangis
Atau tertawa
Kembali ku jejak kan
Kaki ku di pasir pantai ini
Menanti senja
Menikmati deburan ombak
Dan desiran angin
Mencoba menghadirkan lagi
Sosok mu di sisi
Meski
Ku tau tak kan pernah terjadi

Mengenang mu
Di pantai ini
Adalah moment favorit ku,

Ucap mu kala itu pada ku
"Ombak yng menghempas pantai dan air pasang bakal menghapus jejak tapak kaki kita berdua...
Namun
Lautan
Pantai
Dan pasir ini
Akan tetap ada.."

Special mention : @heriadi @el-nailul @miftahuddin @irawandedy @sofian88 @klen.civil


Regards,

@sailawana

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 4 years ago 

Also a beautiful poet. I think i will save this. I love it

Thank you my friend for the attention.. have a great week

 4 years ago 

Thankyou. Do have a great week too

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Thanks a lot, so glad to know this. Thanks sc04 mr. @waterjoe

 4 years ago 

Puisi yang indah kk...
😘

Makasih lia..🤗😘. Nyoe bek hana sagai hehe, biar kayak orang2 tulis puisi juga kita mana tau rzeki. Ohya apa kabar smua nya? Anak2 sht kan??

 4 years ago 

Alhamdulillah sehat kk dan semuanya baik-baik ajha...
Pengen jumpa tapi susah kali keknya...
Pengen great anda meeting

Iya kakak mau juga lah.. cm skrg udh aktf ngajar pula.. nti lah kt kbr2i ya

 4 years ago 

Iya kk..
Ditunggu, 🤗

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