So many
So many
So many things I wanted to say,
they all came too late. I dropped a coin
and made a wish, blue eyed I sit and wait.
The bounds are far but there they are,
just off the land. Look across white-capped seas
and see me, footprints in the sand.
Crashing upon the shores dreaming,
A place far behind. Standing upon the landing
trying hard, but will you find?
A blind man walks on past,
more vision than myself. Asleep, he yelled
you should awaken, take head off of shelf.
Rest is for the weary and dreary
and those with out heart. As energy tapers off
the horse pulls, but push is after cart.
To the cotton spread that makes nest
a cold pillow sleeps. Crawling beneath the covers
Once lovers, twice the thief.
Another will raise flag on dawn
to siren in the call. To marshal what is left
of the body, for anvils to turn to spall.
Fragments of heaven sparks on floor
Where did it escape? Marching on through dark
in hope of light, fall doomed upon fate.
Taraz
[ a Steem original ]
So many things I want to rhyme,
but days are against time
the clock will continue to chime
but dreams will die in their prime
I enjoyed the poem lol just doing my own version
I am of the opinion that the best way to comment poem is to write one :) .
You have a point. A poem related to the one at hand.
Yes. Poetry being, at some level, chain of words, chain reaction is usually quite effective in this context.
I see...you studied music to the core
No, not really. Just, poetry is as much about meanings, as it is about harmony.
Yeah...harmony! Even in fine art.
In every art. But, is not harmony important even in maths, in politics, in nature?
So many dreams I want to achieve but yet none has been fulfilled.
Poetry that makes me think and imagine. Thanks my friend @tarazkp
A good poem reflects a good and resourceful person you are @tarazkp
Beautiful poetry,,waoooo
What a beautiful post
Great job,, great man