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RE: ADSactly Short Story - See Dubai (story part 1)

in #adsactly6 years ago

A well told story, from the beginning manages to capture the reader's attention to follow through to the end. It combines several interesting elements: love, action, suspense. It is a story that can be happening anywhere in the world unfortunately. The desperation for a serious economic situation can lead people to commit illicit acts without thinking about the consequences, but Peter was led to this innocently, although when he found out he wanted to leave and this is impossible, in those businesses there is no turning back and it is always a debt that is only paid with death. This is terrible. Even though it left me with a discomfort, this story seems to me to be very good. I like your stories @churchboy because they are very interesting. Thanks to @adsactly for this kind of content. Greetings.

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Oh, @aurodivys, your comments leave me with such pleasure. You get how those things go. It is unfortunate that they happen at all. Unlike Peter, most youth enter this line of business with both eyes wide open. There is nothing comforting about it but I just felt compelled to paint a correct picture.

All the best @aurodivys

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