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RE: ADSactly Short Stories - The Day After The Day
Wow!!!! That was so much fun!!!! The foreshadowing through the story was nice. I think I had it figured out as he walked through the “all white” building. I love the use of descriptive language throughout the story. It’s something I spend a great deal of time working on with my students. I like the ending as well. The doorman was the gatekeeper to heaven? Fun story!!!
I wanted to change the colour of the building, but decided against it as white seem more realistic than other colours here. The doorman is more like a guide sort of. Thank you.