Reading another story of yours, @churchboy, very well told. It has a well-achieved realistic style, which characterizes your stories, from what I've read before. It reaches an intrigue and tension from the beginning (the relationship with Kosi and his pregnancy), remains in Peter's new reality (journey and start in the work of drug trafficker), and increases with the mishaps and dangers in his "work" until the end (although I felt it is a story that could continue). Peter's character is well characterized, and the action that takes place around him or that he stars in give great plausibility to your story.
You pick up with great narrative aptitude a reality that permeates and hits contemporary life anywhere in the world. Our young people, immersed in problems produced by their disorientation or lack of precaution, allow themselves to be dragged to limit situations, and among them is the atrocious world of the drug trade, which, in most cases, leads to regrettable outcomes: debasement, prison and/or death.
I thank you for sharing your exciting story, @churchboy, and @adsactly for spreading it.