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RE: ADSactly Short Story - Unintended Consequences
Great story @churchboy, were the hell have you been. Mehn, man have missed you and your great story lines.
Now, I've heard of guys been killed mercilessly without human sympathy by cultists, Jack had acted bravely there by not trying to cause any troubles in an attempt trying to fight back for kasa. Most times we should ignore the fact that we're violent and let things go smooth and easy.
Now this is a great story with powerful lessons but I feel it's not just the end, come on @churchboy, you want to tell me that Jack followed kasa back to her room without a blouse and still there wasn't a super story. I'll vex oh.
Lol, now that's an idea. I'm sure something more interesting did happen thereafter. I guess I have to finish the story :)