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RE: ADSactly Short Story - Unintended Consequences

in #adsactly6 years ago

This story reminded me of my college years, when we would study all night with friends and at the end we would go anywhere to see what we were doing. Someone always ended up in trouble or with a three-day hangover. I like how you set the atmosphere of this story from the beginning. Jack's character is so interesting. From the very moment he starts we realise that he is a good boy, from what he says about the teacher, we can intuit that he is intelligent, noble and perhaps a little naive. But what makes us define the character more is that last part with Kasa and the ex-boyfriend. Without the use of force, he manages to recover the girl's things, leaving everyone to the expectation. Also, although he sees the two girls with a male interest, we don't see that there is any intention in him to surpass himself or abuse trust. Anyway, I was delighted with Jack! Not all heroes have cloaks and they can be found anywhere. Thanks for such an interesting story, @churchboy and greetings to the @adsactly team for sharing it.

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Thank you @nancybriti for your wonderful comment. You inspire me to be better. I tried to show the facts you listed above as part of Jack's character. He was diligent boy.

I wish you all the best.