sometime ago comic unfinished
This is the first page of a comic I started a while ago but never finished, partly due to a lack of a script. I had planned a young adult adventure with three protagonists, the discovery of an Egyptian medallion with strange characteristics, and an ending in which a girl and a boy met on a bridge that rise from the earth, being torn from the ground, and was lifted into the sky as they kissed.
The screenwriter wasn't very keen on planning the story for me, and I gave up out of discouragement, also due to personal problems. It's difficult for me to finish a graphic novel. I hope to gain experience and be able to draw a longer story in the present days.

Your comic looks really cool! Don't give up just yet—even without a full script, you can still move forward.
When I started Silent Hawk (https://globalcomix.com/a/reeyor-comics), I didn't have a script either. I just imagined a stone falling from the sky that gave my main character powers. Later, after watching some movies and talking through ideas with an AI, I wrote a script for chapters 2 and 3—though I ended up changing parts of it later due to lost notes and new inspiration.
If you already know the beginning of your story, try picturing where you want the first chapter to end, and start drawing toward that. You don’t need to figure everything out at once. Let the next chapter wait until you’re ready.
Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Feel free to tag me (@dreeyor) in your next post so I don’t miss it!
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So, who are those 3 characters... the girl could stay unknown till the end... who is the guy on the bike and does the big mouth in the first picture play a role or is it the start of the story?
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resteem your own posts! The Blog is the first thing people see. Right now it looks very empty!
Please, also stick to the rules of the community and use the hashtags! - SEE RULES
#artonsteemit #art #drawing #comic #creative #steemexclusive
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Hi, I tried doing some tags and I've resubmitted my two posts to the blog. Apologies, I'm new to this, I hope I did it right. Thanks for the advice :)
The character in the first panel is just a minor detail. The delivery guy is one of the main characters, and this first page is part of the character introduction. Now I think I'll try to work on the current comic, since I started recently and it's what I feel like doing right now...
Dreeyor: Thanks Dreeyor for appreciating my work, we'll see how my current project turns out, I'm trying to get my "swing" back :)
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You did the tags right. It's good to see it worked out. This way people find your post if they search for art or drawing and so on.
Who know someone comes up with a script.. like @dreeyor said "take you time".
There's a time for everything and if the current comic feels better go for it. I love to see some progress, ideas, thoughts here.
It's good to see you.
Thanks for sharing and replying.