@charou, your story is pretty good. The story captured the imagination of both the writer & the reader. You actually spelled the "etcetera" instead of using "etc." I too concur "always respect your fellow humans" give respect to get respect in return. Good writing @charou. Looking forward to your next post.
Thank you, @karishma! Yes though that message is a random little input the meaning behind my story is no matter what your path is (belief, religion, whatever) you can follow it without seeming like a robot. It's okay to be "you".