Picture is Worth a Thousand Words, Proud janan, Pakistan

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Jana was very beautiful since childhood. She was also aware of her beauty. This was the reason why she not only boasted about her beauty, but often humiliated others for her beauty. Her mother initially dismissed this habit of hers as childish. But as time passed, Jana's habit was becoming more and more mature. And she would never show her heart to anyone. Jana knew that Fine's house was also a short distance from her house and Fine was not as beautiful as Jana. Fine's body was not particularly tall and healthy compared to Jana. This was the reason why Jana often teased Fine and Fine's heart would break.

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It is said that the stick of Allah is silent and whoever gets hit by it has to suffer from it for the rest of his life. The same happened with Jana. She used to mistreat Fine since childhood and used to make fun of her saying, "You are neither healthy like me nor do you have beautiful hair. So you should stay away from our group. Because it seems that you do not belong to the horse family. It seems as if a donkey has been given the form of a horse and made you stand up." Since Fine had been rejected by Jana since childhood, she had developed a habit of mistreating Jana to a considerable extent. But still this time Fine's heart was broken again. And she became sad and depressed. Seeing this, Fine's mother called her to her and took her with her to her herd. At the same time, while comforting him with love, he said, "Son, your height is not as beautiful as Jana's, nor is your hair as long as Jana's, but your heart is not like Jana's. Your heart is very sweet and you treat everyone with love and kindness. You never show your heart to anyone else. This is your best habit. Because of which animals like you more. While everyone calls Jana beautiful on the face, Jana is only criticized behind her back."
Once a rich man and his son went on a hunting expedition in the forest. There, Jana was seen by his son. The man's son found Jana so beautiful that he wanted to get the mare. When he expressed his request to his father, his father ordered all the hunters to catch Jana and bring her. Now the hunters sat in ambush and wherever they saw Jana alone, they immediately surrounded Jana from all sides. So that she could not escape. When Jana started running to one side, the hunters tried to catch her from there. When Jana ran to the other side, the same thing happened to her. Even in the direction she went, hunters met her from all sides. Due to which her escape routes were blocked. Finally, Jana was caught. She made a lot of noise to save her somehow, but no animal came to her aid. The reason was Jana's mistreatment. Because everyone loved their own life and no one liked Jana. That's why no animal helped Jana. Fine passed by there. When he found Jana tied up, his heart was very sad. And he went to Jana at night and whispered in her ear that you don't worry, I will try something for you. So that I can free you from here. Now Jana thought of the bad treatment she had done to Fine. She said, "Why are you supporting me? When I never liked you." To this, Fine said that it was your own morals. But my morals do not allow me to leave you alone in this situation. When no one has come to help you. In this way, you will be caught. And you will be away from us. Which I cannot allow. Because your mother should not fall ill because of your grief. I know that mothers love their children very much. And she certainly cannot bear your separation. That is why I have come to free you. Since Jana's body color was light. That is why Jana's color was glowing in the dark. While Fine's color was black, which was hidden in the darkness. And she was not seen by anyone. Fine slowly started cutting the rope with Jana's teeth. Finally, somehow the rope was cut and opened. And she took Jana from there and left silently. While the hunters were busy eating food on the other side, no one noticed that the rope had opened. The bird had disappeared. Fine took Jana to her house so that the hunters would not look for her in the Jana area. Otherwise, if Jana had gone to her house, she would have definitely been caught again. Upon reaching Fine's house, Jana's eyes filled with tears. She apologized to Fine for her mistreatment so that they could be friends. Fine's heart was very sweet, that is why she forgave Jana. But the second is a pure emotion for which love is necessary. This is not done to repay the favor of another. Therefore, Fine did not extend a hand of friendship to him. But he forgave him for his previous behavior.

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 10 days ago 

It sounds like the story is more about people than horses, so I had a bit of trouble with that. To be honest, I don't see Allah's stick haunting Jana's whole life; it seems more like the opposite. In any case, the saviour has character, because there's a big difference between being friends after so many years of bullying and forgiving someone, although I think forgiveness is nothing more than a word when it doesn't feel real. If you did feel it, you might as well be friends, right?

Fine slowly began to bite through the rope with Jana's teeth.
I'm very curious to know how good Jana's teeth are at biting through rope. I assume this is a mistake by the translator.

Thank you for participating, you've written a very long and good story.

It is exactly like this, I have conveyed human emotions to humans through animals. And as far as cutting the rope with teeth is concerned, it is really a translation error. Because I had written about Fine that he cut the rope with his teeth and untied it. Because we are human beings ourselves and how can we feel the emotions of animals? Therefore, we want to give a message to the world by placing the nature of humans above animals. As far as the rod of Allah is concerned, it is not visible to anyone. But since the retribution process takes place in the world. Therefore, the retribution process had also started with Jana.

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