Fifty-word story roundup and new prompt!
Thank you so much to everyone who contributed a #fiftywords short story this week! It was really interesting to see what came out of the mouse prompt. (Note to self: When selecting a prompt, remember not to use rodents or other creatures that some people dread with a passion! Ha ha.)
In this post I'll mention what I felt was the top story of the week for style, creativity, inspiring use of the prompt and the guidelines, and excellent grammar. I will also supply a fresh new prompt. (You're going to like this one!)
As you know, if you've joined my 50-word challenges, I am currently continuing the initiative started by @miniature-tiger. And by the way, did you know that @miniature-tiger is busy designing a really cool game called Archipelago? Check it out!
(Image credit: Original image by pixel2013, Pixabay)
Fifty-word prompt results
First the #fiftywords rock star of the week
This was really challenging, but here's my pick of the week:
- The little mouse, by @adigitalife, tells the story of a parent remembering when his almost-grown-up big girl was just a little girl.
Well done!
Second, all the honorable mentions
This time around, I just couldn't find a way to choose just a few honorable mentions, so instead I'm listing all the rest of the entries. For fun, I've grouped them in categories. It is really interesting to compare different stories inspired by the same prompt.
Stories about computer mice
- A hi never said, by @ahmadmanga
- An unhealthy obsession, by @kaelci
- What kind and color mouse do you have? by @purpledaisy57
- Domestic animal, by @anixio
- Mouse, by @steemitdiversity
Stories that involve mice being hunted and/or meeting their untimely end
- What color is your parachute, by @preparedwombat
- Cheese in the mousetrap, by @thatlovechild
- The claws of hunger, by @photovitamin
- Mouse, by @beginningtoend
- Mouse, by @dirge
- Mouse in the hall, by @pyrowngs
- Gifts, by @carn
- He is dead, by @iamthegray
Other themes
These uncategorized tales were interesting because they ranged from an expression of love for a pet mouse, to a magical realism piece to the story of big man with a tiny name, to a soldier tribute. I've also thrown my piece about a church mouse into the mix.
- Mouse, by @tygertyger
- Bring cats back-op - Your mission should you choose to accept it, is...., by @ktfabler
- Mouse, by @ablaze
- The fearless soldier, by @feebie
- The church mouse, by @jayna (that's me!)
Great job, everyone!
This week's 50-word story prompt
The prompt for this coming week is forest. There are so many directions you can go with this prompt--to the realm of fantasy or the realm of fear, for example. I can't wait to see how this prompt inspires you!
Guidelines
Here they are:
- Write a story in 50 words. (It's especially cool if you can hit 50 words exactly!)
- Use the #fiftywords tag, and post the link in the comments of this post.
- Be sure to read and upvote the work of the other participants. It's all about community!
- Use only artwork that you have the right to use, and attribute it properly. See below.
Proper use of images
Proper use of images means one of the following:
- It is your image.
- The image is public domain, or under creative commons licensing rules.
- If it is not one of the above, you have actual permission.
Be sure to mention that the image is yours, or attribute its source. And if it's not public domain or creative license, be sure to state that you have permission.
Here are two great resources from my friends at #thewritersblock:
Deadline: Saturday, March 31st
Good luck!
The 50-word story clan
I'm mentioning you here if you were tagged in Miniature Tiger's most recent post, or have participated in one of my prompts. Please let me know if you would like your tag removed in this or future posts. (I will likely go ahead and starting deleting those who are not active.)
@ablaze, @adigitalife, @agmoore, @ahmadmanga, @aksounder, @alheath, @andyartland, @anixio, @anjkara, @awhsarada
@beginningtoend, @bentheredonethat, @bhop42moro, @bitsendpieces, @botefarm @brandonsadventur, @bryarose23
@caleblailmusik, @carlosparejo, @carn, @charlesmackenzie, @cizzo, @creatr, @curtwriter
@damianjayclay, @deirdyweirdy, @diebitch, @dinavice, @dirge, @divineinyang
@eaglespirit, @ebitularmbert, @elementm, @emwalker, @enjar, @evgsk
@feebie, @felt.buzz, @fireawaymarmot, @fitinfun, @freewheel
@godwine, @gonzo
@hope-k
@iamthegray, @ilt-yodith, @isa93, @isufbakaj
@jadams2k18, @janine-ariane, @jakeybrown, @jayna, @joyyrush
@kaelci, @kainos-success, @kamalkennedy, @kingernie, @ktfabler
@ldacey-laforge, @lonestarpoet, @loraine, @lucylin
@Mammasitta, @marie-jay, @mark-dahl, @maxiemoses-eu, @metzli, @mikesthoughts, @mineopoly, @miniature-tiger, @momzillanc
@naquoya, @naso, @navaneeth, @negativer, @niallon11, @nicolexu1337
@onewithearth
@paintingangels, @photovitamin, @pixiehunter, @poeticnest, @preparedwombat, @prydefoltz, @purpledaisy57, @pyrowngs
@rodgriocabrera
@saoirseronan, @sciencevienna, @skoolielove, @spalatino, @stayoutofherz, @steemitdiversify, @sukhasanasister, @superjongky
@tanglebranch, @thatlovechild, @theblackcrow, @therosepatch, @tiatu, @tibra, @tin-tin, @tony-duke, @tygertyger
@udayakumarage, @upen-srv
@vaitelavicius, @vivek-g
@whitewizard, @wilfredn, @wordsalmighty, @wylde
@yomibolo
@zen-art
Thank you so much for participating!
I'm sad that I missed this round, but glad it's back again for a new round!
Congrats to @adigitalife for the rock star honor!
Thanks! I've never been a rock star before so this is great! :)
Here is my entry!, Into the forest. I've enjoyed reading a lot of stories around here. Putting a feeling into fifty words is really a challenge, so thank you @jayna for making this contest!
Yes, it is really a challenge to do. Thanks so much for joining in and giving it a whirl!
Adding my submission here for the record:
...For the Trees
Thank you for this thoughtful piece, @negativer!
Don't forget me!!! :)
This is my entry
😊
I won’t forget anyone! I’m traveling, and haven’t had a chance to check for and read all the posts, but I promise I will give each and every one my full attention, and I hope all the other fifty-worders will do the same!
Here's my entry for this week :D ~ https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@kaelci/an-unfortunate-turn-of-events-fiftywords
Looking forward to reading everyone's entries. "Forest" has so many possibilities :D
Good job, everyone! Sorry I didn't have anything for the mouse prompt, @jayna, but I'll try for forest!
Yay! You have all week! Jayna sends @therosepatch an encouraging cyber hug.
Thanks, love! <3
Here is my entry for this week
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@ablaze/she-is-a-forest-fifty-words-story
@jayna thanks for the new prompt...
Heres my entry:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@kingernie/never-stand-alone
Oh, wow! Seriously? I'm very honored, thanks! Plus, I get to tell my daughter I'm "rock star of the week" in part because of her. 😎
This week's prompt is a good one. You're right that there are many directions we can go this. I have a few ideas already.
As several people have so kindly said, it is well deserved! Good luck with the next one.
My submission for forest: https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@adigitalife/lost-a-fifty-word-story
I just checked out the winning piece
Well deserved
Thanks for the mention too
Expect my entry soon
Blessings
Thanks! I also like the creativity of your story. I'll be happy to see your next entry.