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RE: STEEMIT IS LIKE A BOX OF CHOCOLATES ... YOU NEVER KNOW WHAT YOU GONNA GET!!

in #chocolate8 years ago (edited)

I upvoted your post because it's obvious that you put a LOT of creative energy into actually presenting us with the article. Speaking frankly though, it was a little difficult to read.

With that, here's a little constructive criticism: Take some extra time to proof-read your article before hitting the "POST" button. If English is not your mother-language, maybe think about having someone else proof-read it and offer you their feedback.

Well-articulated grammar will go a long way in guiding your reader more easily through your thought process. I've upvoted and followed you because I really like your ideas and creativity. Peace!

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@highimpactflix Thank you very much for your comment. You are right!English is not my mother-language and I have a lot to improve. Posting is one of ways to do so:) I will make sure to double check grammar next time:)