CineAtlas 60 | Week 4 - Object as Character | [Ola Girls School Opposite]
What object did you choose
I chose a motorcycle where someone is sitting down on it watching football. Motorcycle is used for transportation and on my way returning home from my friend's house I came across this motorcycle along the roadside of Ola street.
Why did you select it
I selected this object because it was parked by the roadside, where the owner was sitting comfortably on it watching a football game. The reason is for my views to know how men loved football which a lot of men can sacrifice looking for their daily bread for the sake of watching a football game. It was the love of the football game that made the owner of the motorcycle park it by the roadside so he could watch the football game.
Why this location fits the object
This location fits the object because it is on a busy highway where anyone who is passing through the street can see it. The football field is at the heart of the community and it's well known by almost everyone in the town. Also, the objective fits the location because it was being parked off the main road and where it was parked there were no disturbances of traffic or whatsoever.
What story, feeling, or message did you want to express through it
The story I wanted to express through it was that anyone who loves football can't resist stopping at a football field to watch the game that's going on, no matter how busy the person might be. There is a spirit that follows football fans that makes them argue about football games and that makes them like football so much, just like the elderly man who sacrifices his time and parks his Okada motorcycle for the sake of the football match he was watching.
How did you try to make the object feel like a character
How I tried to make the object feel like a character was capturing the object without the notice of the person on the object. I stood behind the person and captured the object clearly in a way that the person's face wouldn't show. Also, I try to make the object feel like a character by including part of the person who sat down on the object so my story can be balanced, having both the object and someone real.
| Google+ | W94M+P7R |
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| Map | https://maps.app.goo.gl/rVaSpwkuNVY7cgZd8 |
| Steematlas | [//]:# (!steematlas 37.906813 lat 23.383187 long Ola Girls road d3scr) |
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Evaluation — CineAtlas 60 (Week 4: Object as Character)
Post: @woka-happiness — "CineAtlas 60 | Week 4 - Object as Character | Ola Girls School Opposite"
Evaluation Summary (Week 4)
Final Score: 6.9 / 10
General Comment
An honest and creative entry with a genuinely interesting concept the motorcycle as a silent witness to football passion is a strong idea. The main weaknesses are the incorrect SteemAtlas coordinates, the limited visual execution, and the absence of photos. The story lives more in the written explanation than in the film itself, which is the opposite of what cinematic storytelling requires.
0.00 SBD,
0.24 STEEM,
0.24 SP
The bike seems t be a nice prompt for the contest. I felt the twist came in the 6th second when the kid entered in the scene. I know you shot this movie from behind so showing the face of football lover was not so easy. All the best..
0.00 SBD,
0.01 STEEM,
0.01 SP
Yes you're right sir, I was trying my best not to show the face of anyone other than just the bike, but it wasn't easy thou. Thank you so much