You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: 〝忘乎所以〞不简单(原创诗) - “三个一”活动|月旦评View the full contexttvb (66)in #cn • 8 years ago 虽然没有按律来写，但诗写得不错，起承转合很有味道。
完全是个诗歌小白，感谢一姐指点！再接再厉≧∇≦≧∇≦≧∇≦