Weekly Story Writing Competition 1 | Story Continuation

in Colombia-Original6 days ago

Hello, friends welcome to my post in which I have discussed "Story Continuation" as part of my participation in this contest organized by @mamun123456

One day, Peter, Rasheedy, and Musa decided to embark on an early morning trip to the airport to avoid police and traffic on the road. Musa is to take Peter and Rasheedy to the airport so he can return the car, whereas Peter and Rasheedy flight was the first flight of the day, which was fixed around 7 am.

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The three of them are close friends and business associates living in one apartment. They live far from the airport, and so in order for them to be at the airport on time, they had to leave their house as early as possible to avoid traffic and police on the road, as they don't want to be delayed by either traffic or police.

Since they had planned on traveling as early as possible to the airport, Peter set an alarm before going to bed, and it rang at 3 am. Immediately, his phone rang, and he woke up Rasheedy and Musa from sleep to get ready. They woke up, took their bath, dressed up, came out with their bag, entered their car, and began driving to the airport when others were still asleep.

Unfortunately, while they were driving, their car broke down along the road and they couldn't find a mechanic. They became stranded on the road, feeling cold and distressed. After some minutes, cars started passing through and flowing.

They got out of their car and began seeking help, but all those they were calling on to help them couldn't stop and give them a leave because they were scared.

Peter said, "What are we going to do now"? And Rasheedy replied, "I think she should exercise more patience and wait for the day to break so we can see help as people are afraid of coming close to us".

Musa said, "I think I have a solution, and if you both agree with me, this car will start immediately". Peter and Rasheedy agreed and tried to do what Musa suggested. When they opened the car bonnet, they discovered it was just a minor issue that stopped the car from starting.

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Identifying the issue, Musa started the car, and they continued their journey to the airport but got trapped by traffic. Before they could come out of the traffic, it was already 6:30 am. It was almost time for their flight, and luckily for them, they arrived at the airport before their flight time.

Reaching the airport, they were told their flight couldn't be possible at the boarding pass, but they still insisted they still had about 20 minutes left before their flight could be cancelled. At some point, when the staff noticed the boarding passes, they agreed and tried to create problems, but they were then allowed to move to the plane.

I am inviting; @dove11, @lhorgic and @ruthjoe

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 5 days ago (edited)
Article Verification& Feedback
Article PresentationWhere did you make a mistake? I shared a short story and told you to start from where I left off, but you created a completely different story.
Plagiarism free
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FeedbackYou wrote the story very nicely, but there are some shortcomings in the topic and rules given in my competition. I hope you will pay attention to them carefully in the next competition.
Followed rulesI clearly wrote that your article should be at least 500 words and above 1,000 words. You did not keep that in mind.
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I'm really sorry you had a hard time, but I didn't get everything right according to the requirements, so I invalidated the entry. I hope that next time you participate, you will definitely read the rules a little better.