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RE: Constrained Writing Contest #30 - A new beginning

Yikes! Setting up a date for someone without telling them? That's a ballsy move. Not everyone would be okay with that.
It was quite hard to tell at times who was talking because you introduced more than two characters, but I made sense of it at last.
Everything else aside, I think you captured the "awkwardness" of the first meeting on a blind date rather well. Definitely happens all to often that the first few moments of getting to know someone get awkward.

Thank you very much for your entry.