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RE: Lucid Dream

in #contest7 years ago

I'm so glad I didn't offer something on this round. Your piece was brilliant and satisfying. I thought the ending would have been fine after the first part. Then I read:

Humans could not escape their nature; they always looked for permanence and meaning outside themselves. It suspected it was a consequence of their need to reboot every few hours.

A seeming throwaway, with significance and humor.

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