RE: STACH Short Story Contest #10: 199 words-10SBD prize pool!
ungrateful love
A badly hurt young ran desperately down the street spitting her failure, she was not crazy, only had wounds in his heart for that ungrateful love that has beaten her, although he was very young fell in love with the wrong person who at first tricked her with dazzling Gestures and compliments, was a man much older than her, and her experience allowed her to know how to touch her fragile heart, she innocent fell into the networks of love, she gave herself with crazy unbridled passion, the simply made him believe that they were made for each other.
Laura missed every day of his behavior but love blindfolded him and clouded his reason, they already had several months of relationship and he knew almost nothing about his life. Although he was an excellent professional, his feelings were very unstable, he had double life and several adventures, among them Laura, who when she found that the love of her life constantly deceived her; he could not contain his tears, the sadness and the despair took her to the edge of madness, only thought in the sincere love that he delivered without condition in exchange filthy lies and detestable deception.
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