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RE: STEEMIT HAIKU CONTEST # WEEK 13: (Original Contest)
'He's My World'
He smiles like flower
His kiss feels like spring
He's the world to me!
'He's My World'
He smiles like flower
His kiss feels like spring
He's the world to me!
Welcome, @hungry-nomad
This is a very good poem, we enjoyed reading it... but
it is not a Haiku... the first line has to many syllables in
it. Please check
I made the correction.Please do check and let me know 🙂
Ok... good to go.
Good Luck 🍀