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RE: Finish the Story Challenge!

in #contest6 years ago

My entry:
https://steemit.com/contest/@norkamoran/a-terrible-disappointment

But at that moment he remembered when looking through his boyfriend's belongings he found those horrible tests that showed him the terrible mental illness that he suffered: he was pedophile. It was then that she decided to leave and abandon him. She went out and on the outskirts of the hotel I take a taxi back to her house. For Sabrina, Carlos was her love at first sight. She was 21 years old when she met him and fell in love with Carlos, a young man of 24 years old who presented himself as a retailer. Since they met, he was friendly and charming but also warm. He was a very handsome man, a true gentleman who treated her like a queen, so much so, that she came to feel like the luckiest girl in the world.

by @norkamoran

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very good!