DnW Poetry Contest #3 New Theme and Announcement of Winners!!
GRACIAS TO ALL!
Yes! Gracias to everyone who have joined and has given their warm support to us ( I and @kneelyrac), in our second-week 'poetry contest'.
As you can see, I am the one who is announcing the winners of the DnW Poetry Contest #2, for the reason that I will be the one who will be giving this week's poetry theme until the fourth week of January. So you better hit that 'follow' button on the right upper corner of my page, LOL!
From @kneelyrac 's first week announcement of winners, we decided to make some adjustment from our criteria. And for this week's tabulation, we have come up with a much accurate result. Still and all, it was hard choosing the best from you guys because all of you were excellent! And together with the new criteria we have just posted, I am reminding every one of the other 'RULES' we have mentioned;
Kindly please read our rules guys :)
WINNERS
FIRST PRIZE
THE LOVER'S CRY
The rain falls and I stand under
Watching them as they dine together
My darling wife and my younger brother
My matrimony they put asunder
I stand there, filled with gloom
As my marriage meets its doom
I'm devastated and torn apart
Nothing can mend my broken heart
My tears roll, I feel the pain
I pull out my gun and take my aim
I pull the trigger, my brother dies
I bring an end to all the lies
The blood spilled is washed away
But the rain can't take the pain away
I'm under the rain, you ask why?
So none of you can see me cry
SECOND PRIZE
Pain On A Pouring Rain
By @levinvillas
Gone are the days when we’re side by side
Missing the moments that to you I confide
I try not to glance, I try not to glare
As if Im walking in a tunnel of despair
Arrays of dark and black fill the silent room
No words can ever explicate this gloom
Laying in bed at night alone
Wondering why I'm feeling like a stone
Clouded with thoughts like waiting in the sky
And pondering everything is a trivial lie
People keep on asking me why
All i know is, without you I could just die.
This sentiment is too much to take
My heart is fragile and now it begins to break
Turning a blind eye to the cause of pain
And letting it out together with the pouring rain.
THIRD PRIZE
Heaven's Teardrops
Have you ever wonder what the rain symbolized?
Still searching for an answer, yes I will try
I’m thinking of some thoughts as I look up in the sky
Would it be the teardrops when the heaven cries?
Did you see our nature? Destructed and tortured
Look at the ocean, filled with trash and now blurred
Try to breathe the air, is it still safe to bear?
Deforestation in everywhere, would you even care?
Did you ever imagine a country without soldiers?
Hoping that guns and bullets will be gone forever
No more of poverty, corruption and hierarchy
Sufficient food for everybody and a nation of equality.
Let us all be reminded whenever the rain falls
Maybe it’s a warning, a message and call
The heaven is hurting, the heaven is grieving
I do hope that the next rain, will stand for celebrating.
CONSOLATION PRIZES
I’m Just A Rain
By @devjanes
Look up and see the rain
as it drifts to your cheeks and feel the pain
hidden words were locked in mind
as I cry alone, I know I'm blind
Strongest rain will be my company
come! talk to me, give me your sympathy
Silent rain don't want us to hear
like the thoughts in my head I want to clear
Walk with me under the rain
hold me tight and fill my brain
the sound of drops became my friend
too near, I can see the end
Fallen memories I want to chase
just left a note just in case
no time to say goodbye nor to kiss my wife
I'm just a rain, keep falling in life
Unforgotten
T'was in December rain's pounding hard
I was soaked in the rain waiting for a cab
You came, and with your smile so bright
You asked, "Would you like to ride?"
I looked at you thinking how to decide
Wondering why our worlds have to collide
I have to admit I was taken aback
Tears flowing, memories flashing back
You were my first and greatest love
My best ally and confidante
With you every day was a sweet delight...
Things faltered with your change of heart
How time flies, it's been three years now
The pain still lingers, you don't have a clue
Coz like the roaring of a thunder,
My heart is still beating strong for you!
HURRAH! CONGRATULATIONS!
Prizes will be sent directly to your respective wallets by @kneelyrac
THIS WEEK'S NEW THEME IS...
THE RULES
Your poem must be original.
Upvote and resteem this post.
Use #dnwpoetrycontest as your main tag and #poetry as your second tag
Your title must start with "DnW Poetry Contest #3: + Your own title."
Comment you entry link below.
Any types of rhyme are acceptable.
Every participant must draw an image that is relevant to the given theme. ( No pressure on this part. We just want you to use your own header image.)
Your poem must contain four quatrains. Each quatrain contains four lines.
Deadline runs until Monday 18:00 PST (6:00 PM, Philippine Standard Time)
THE PRIZES
First Place - 4 sbd
Second Place - 3 sbd
Third Place - 2 sbd
Consolation - (2) 0.50 sbd
Prizes may increase depending on the support we receive.
THE CRITERIA
Originality 20%
Relevance to the weekly theme 20%
Logical Structure (Shows a coherent and smooth transition) 50%
Synchronization ( Header Image and Poem Entry) 10%
ALL ENTRIES WILL TABULATED USING THE CRITERIA MENTIONED ABOVE BY YOUR TWO LOVELY HOSTS, @deeday31 & @kneelyrac
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Congratulations Winners!!
And to all who participated, a very big thank you to all of you!
As a sign of gratitude, all of you received an upvote from me. It's not that big but I hope it helps somehow. Thank you so much!
Hey guys here's my entry for this weeks competition. Its titled "More Time".
https://steemit.com/dnwpoetrycontest/@francistagbo/dnw-poetry-contest-3-more-time-4f166b8670acf
Hope its not too late.
Oh my God!!!! I won!!! This is the first time I've ever taken first position in a steemit contest!!! I thought i was cursed to always come second or third. Thank you so much @kneelyrac and @deeday31, you guys are just amazing!!!
Thank you for joining! :D
Here's my entry. Thank you so much!
https://steemit.com/dnwpoetrycontest/@celestiaperidot/dnw-poetry-contest-3-when-time-comes
abot pa po ba? :(( @deeday31 @kneelyrac
Here's my entry for DnW Poetry Contest #3. I kinda broke some rules but yeah, whatever :)
thank you for your entry! :)
Thanks for joining! :)
https://steemit.com/dnwpoetrycontest/@livsky/dnw-poetry-contest-3-dying
Thank you for this contest! Thank you for the opportunity. I hope you like it! Kudos!
Thank you for your entry, hope you'll win!
🗸🗸🗸 just a friendly reminder to all contestants to re-check all the rules that have been mentioned above! God Bless and a Have Good Day Ahead!
Thank you for this reminder! I appreciate it very much!☺️
Thank you for your entry! :)
Woah! Thank you mga ateeee :D
welcome :)
Mujoin najud ko.hahaha
apil na yok :)
Nag drawing nako ate deeday pero wa najuy mapuga sa akong utok na mga balak. Haha
wow congratulations!😘😘 mga makata bow!
congratulations for the winners :)