Meet me in the cosmic sea [Day 35½]
Meet me in the cosmic sea
original poetry with reading
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Meet me in the cosmic sea
I wait for you until
life's color leaks away.
We are the sultry stars,
and we are salt spray.
I sit with folded legs
upon the gently sloping mount;
You are fiery morn,
and I am night's fount.
Your eyes a pearling galaxy,
your voice of boiling cloud
meets my tones of silk & lichen:
We converge as was avowed.
"I wait for you until
the fire's heart turns into frost."
You murmured through the wind,
by the wind your words were tossed.
You stood upon the summit,
The air called you away.
We are the sultry stars,
and we are salt spray.
Written by
@d-pend
4/11/18
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Art by
Gary Kezele
.1 — "Star Ocean" [cropped]
2 — "Frozen Spiral"
3 — "Deep Temptation"
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understanding your poetry is very difficult by reading it but the way you pronounciate it it helps very much to understand what you want to say,
nice poetry thanks for it man. have a nice day @d-pend
I usually dont like reading poetries on love and romance because that’s usually the only topic people have, but the way YOU can portray even rocks and sand seems amazingly beautiful , what should i say about you speaking about love !
The texture of cosmos in love truly made this poetry divine 😃
Beautiful as always :)
In the audio it says purple cloud ..I think
Fourth stanza, fourth line could be "by wind your words were tossed." shorter and lighter. and also the second line could use a touch, maybe removing the "the".
thethe ? really?!
#WhenTheTheStudentTriesToCriticTheTheMaster :D
I love❤️ how love❤️ can inspire you to make alovely❤️ love❤️ poem we'd all just love❤️
Your post is golden.. i think writing might have its advantages as well as & also nice post thanks for sharing
You stood upon the summit,
The air called you away.
We are the sultry stars,
and we are salt spray.
A very fine romantic write I was thinking, but then the last piece of art has me thinking ... a fine poem about romantic loss. In the end, the heart wants what the heart wants:) Lucky for us poets:)
Why steemit dont have heart button? This poetry deserves much love... and love and more love
Lovely
The words are beautiful. The great poet is always charming in carving the word.
Lovely poem. Deep longing.
This is my type of poetry you know this one felt so beautiful, so pure and the setting for the romance was very dazzling Daniel it's really really been a while