Unfinished Track - Looking to improve [Original Track]

in #dsound6 years ago


Whenever I'm kinda stuck in a spot from a composition standpoint, I like to go back and listen to older tracks to see if there is anything I can kinda revitalize and improve on. I was doing exactly that, and I kinda stumbled across this guy and thought it might be cool to expand on. Especially considering I'm looking for new (and old) material to throw on this new album, I figured this would be a good track to maybe get some feedback on.

Looking to my DSound friends for advice - thanks for listening!



► Listen on DSound

► Listen from source (IPFS)

Sort:  

Thanks for sharing this great music @harrisonmir. Please upvote and resteem this comment. Carry on you activity dear....
... just fucking with you man, trying to fit in the crowd :P.... the track is dope definitely.
The kick is like thunder and the snare hit like lightning... CREATING a musical storm. peace.

Haha dude you nailed it 🤣🤣

Thanks man, always means a lot coming from you!

Hello atharrisonmir I aslo enjoy you please also resteem and yes carry on you activity.

I like the guy that hashtagged #Done after upvote and resteem. I had to blast him up the charts a little. #Done

Troll comment, #Done.

Haha thank you guys for reassuring me that I'm not the only one who notices these same comments over and over again 😂 #done

Let's never forget that all those comments might have the true potential to become lyrics for a musical piece. Possible HIT material... that's what I am looking for and you guys should too.
One deluxe spam comment I received that @carlgnash turn into a beautiful song.
Carry on dear... #done #analyzemyfunction

Hahaha dude that's genius @vachemorte. Now I know where to look when I'm stuck with writers block, none other than the Steemit comments section! loll

Hi @harrisonmir, I love your post, sir! You just earned my UPV0TE and RESTEEM. I will also follow you, you are awesome!

Hahahaha I accidentally hit 'Enter' and the above was all I commented hahaha.

Dude! This beginning of a track...killer...love the feel you gave it ... That moody synth in the beginning...sounds like my grandfather giving me lectures on life when I was in high school and getting bad grades I just keep re-listening to it because I want more (or because I miss my grandfather telling me I suck at school)... C'monn just finish it already :)).

And also please don't forget to check my content and upvote :P

#DONE

We really need to turn this into a troll guys. The RESTEEM hymn ... we have lots of lyrics, or rather the same but in a huge amount all over the place. Peace <3

DUDE!!! I'm totally digging it! Cooking breakfast to this beat is life. Keep up the great work @harrisonmir

Great post dear @harrisonmir i like your all post thank you for shere.....
#Upvote
#Resteem
#Done

I dig the sounds, especially when the harmonics come in at the 1 min part, after that section I would maybe do something with the same sounds, but lengthen the nots a bit and change up the beat slightly, get a little weird with it and add some modulation to the sounds. I like where its at so far though.

Good call! Yeah these kinds of tracks are tricky because once you get in that groove, it's tough to figure out how to switch it up sometimes lol. Good suggestions

good tune, synths could use a bit more loving, good flow

Thanks @dicepticon! Yeah definitely need to fine tune a little bit, good lookin' out!

DnB & House :D Like it

Oh yeah man, awesome intro and even better drop, great!

Dude for just a start, it is already amazing !

Listening its a amazing

Touch my heart first time im visit your blog really im enjoying keep it up @harrisonmir

💓Wow excellent musical post dear @harrisonmir
#I just upvote and resteem your post.....?💓

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.20
TRX 0.12
JST 0.030
BTC 60843.73
ETH 3406.11
USDT 1.00
SBD 2.57