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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Dear @opeyemioguns, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.8/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | your story leaned heavily toward crime realism, while the contest asked for more imagination and a touch of fantasy. |
| Total | 8.9/10 |
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- The ending felt too convenient because the police solved the problem. Timothy didn't really take action himself. If you had added a more imaginative twist like spy angle, your story would stand out even more.