Dear @sabbirakib, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | The ending, while neat, felt a little predictable. I was hoping for a surprise or a twist. |
| Total | 9.45/10 |
Feedback
- You respected the meeting setup and followed the boss’s instructions closely but some descriptions in your story were more like status reports than immersive storytelling. I didn't feel the pressure, tension, or excitement of the deadline.