Dear @senehasa, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 1/1 | You presented your story neatly and in a way that was easy to follow. |
| Total | 9.6/10 |
Feedback
- You built the story well with realistic conflicts and a strong ending that showed growth in both characters. Where you could improve is making Dev more in line with the witty personality as described in the original narrative. Overall, a thoughtful and engaging effort!
Thank you very much for your kind feedback. I truly appreciate your observation about Dev’s character. Due to the word limit, I found it a little difficult to expand on his witty side while also covering the conflicts and resolution. Have a nice day.