Dear @hisgeneral, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2/3 | Satisfactory |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | Mid-level effort, but not memorable. |
| Total | 8.25/10 |
Feedback
- You summarized the flashback argument instead of showing it through dialogue and actions. That made the conflict feel less dramatic and less engaging.