Dear @opeyemioguns, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.8/1 | Satisfactory |
| My observation | 0.95/1 | You followed the original outline closely. |
| Total | 9.25/10 |
Feedback
- Overall, you did well, and your story balances temptation and loyalty in a way that readers can connect to. To push it higher, I'd suggest giving us more direct dialogue between John and Tina to feel the spark instead of summarizing it.