Dear @fortwis09, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.65/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.95/1 | You chose the "save John from temptation" option for the ending, which fits the rules perfectly, though it was the safer route. |
| Total | 9.4/10 |
Feedback
- You stayed close to the safe, expected path. Tina as a character lacked depth, and there wasn't a surprising twist. To stand out, you need to push your imagination further. Overall, it was a nice effort!