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RE: Cheap Transportation - Short Story Contest Entry for Art Prompt Writing Contest #8
The dialogue is quite lively and human! I'm a little confused on how SPOILER Artie died, and some of the prose-y parts were confusing, but other than that, it fit the prompt well! Nice job!
Thank you for your comment! Actually, I just decided to dive in to this challenge and see where it would take me. I kind of liked the idea of leaving a little suspense at the end - what I've heard referred to as an "Alfred Hitchcock ending" which he seemed to be known for.
I wouldn't know. Unfortunately, the only film I've seen by Hitchcock was The 39 Steps and it's ending seemed to wrap up pretty neatly.