You should consider using their dialogue to better distinguish the characters. Nancey's description of the pocket sounds like how Nicole would have said it.
You should consider using their dialogue to better distinguish the characters. Nancey's description of the pocket sounds like how Nicole would have said it.
Oh. You're right.
I meant for her to only sometimes sound more like Nicole. I'll have to consider whether this is an appropriate time for it or not.
Thanks for the feedback.