You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: An Assassin's Tool: A Nyepsium Wars Novella -- Part Six

in #fiction7 years ago

My kind of dialogue!!

“Be careful Mats. I don’t have many friends, and I would hate to lose one of them.”

I smiled back at him. “You have exactly one friend.”"

Sort:  

Thanks! It was one of my exchanges to write in the whole story. It felt real to me--just the kind of thing one of my quick witted friends might say to me.

That's exactly how I felt when I read it! Keep on writing! You now have a new follower.