Wow! You wrote this? Very heart wrenching. I can just about feel their emotions, the sadness of good bye that remains unspoken, unsaid. Powerful. I love this write. And i have to say it is very creative. I also write short stories, so you should know i mean it when i say this is good. It is. And it deserves more rewards. I wish i had much steem power.

Even so, i ca at least lend a small helping hand. I run a daily newbie/plankton exposure project where i feature select newbie posts, which i scout for and find. To feature, those posts must meet 3 criteria, namely, originality, relevance and depth.

My hope, is that in so featuring your very high quality post, i might expose your fine work, and in the process lead traffic to upvote and support your work, because it deserves it.

Sometimes it works, and other times it does not, still, i hope that you remain with the satisfaction, that at least someone (me) recognizes your quality.

If that can encourage you to steem on, and keep adding value to the platform, i can only be too happy, and honored.

That said,