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RE: Exquisite Corpse: "Get Off My Farm, Punk!” - Chapter Seven
Blue, nicely done!
Two gorgeous plot twists: The appearance of Tezcatlipoca and Hampton's ghostly manifestation. It leaves me wanting more ... I'm invested.
Mechanically, your story was well written throughout.
And a Curie to boot! Congratulations ... well deserved.
Quill
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the plot twists :D